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Dark Poetry #4

Mutterings of a Troubled Mind

UseTheIllusion
Member

since 2006-02-06

Posts 223
In a state of limbo

0 posted 2006-03-29 11:03 PM

Mortally wounded,
Left for dead,
Towards the sky is where I am headed,
Reaching towards the heavens,
No need to pretend,
My fate is sealed,
Won’t you lend me a hand?
My grave is dug,
The verdict is in,
The jury finds me guilty,
I stepped out of my skin.
Thought outside of the box,
Put myself in another’s shoes,
And the reality was as hard as a rock.
Headed to nowhere,
Fare costs my soul,
The ticket is shame,
I have no place else to go,
Take a ride on this astral plane,
And there is no coming back,
It’s a one way ticket to hell,
And everyone is on the attack.

Asking god for forgiveness,
Receiving silence in return,
It is none of his business,
It is time for me to burn,
And despite my life of ignorance,
His presence is the only constant thing,
The independent being,
From whose call I expect my phone to ring,
But the call never comes,
And that is my life’s sum,
‘cause when you add it all up,
There is nowhere to run.

My body is estranged,
From my soul set in limbo,
My mind is deranged,
Beleaguered by telepath bimbo’s,
Who all want to suck,
My sanity from my brain,
Attacked by my personal demons,
In my personal domain,
There is no escape,
From the incessant rape,
Of a force so depraved,
As ones mind,
When it’s insane.

firy
New Member

since 2006-04-07

Posts 8
florida

1 posted 2006-04-09 02:15 AM

wow that poem was real man i hope you keep writing
firy

chief

byski
Member

since 2006-01-26

Posts 235
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2006-04-09 12:47 PM

No kidding! I can say that your writing only gets better everytime you post. I like your creativity with words there, your very extensive vocabulary. But you writing has some sort of insight into the human psyche which pulls you in and grabs your attention, well at least it does that for me. Thumbs up!

Ace of Crimson Tears
Junior Member

since 2006-03-03

Posts 14
United States

3 posted 2006-04-10 12:14 PM

Nice wording, love your work. Keep on writting.

Ace of Crimson Tears

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