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greysolace
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since 2006-03-27
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0 posted 2006-03-28 11:41 PM



Solitude


Why is it that I crave solitude,
The serene of silence
The emptiness of the world
The absence of life?

The noise of nature is too much
Too imposing
Penetrating every layer of isolation
Destroying the essence of seclusion

I need a place for reflection
A place to sort my thoughts
Away from the intrusion of the nosy
And the accusations of the prosecutors

A place void of everyone but me
Small, dark and cool
To separate me from them
The ones who don’t understand

Let me bear my pain alone
Nurse the scars of yesterday myself
While the music blares noiselessly
And the rain outside steadily falls

Let the dark cool wash over me
Erasing the unwanted memories
Until all I have is me
And the infinite depths of my mind

~~Poetry is written emotion~~
Mekeda D.

© Copyright 2006 Mekeda DuBard - All Rights Reserved
SATURN
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since 2004-05-04
Posts 78
ok,us
1 posted 2006-03-31 12:36 PM


nice write and yes i agree we all need a place of reflection and to get away from the world.

  Alwayz
   ~SATURN~

inspire
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since 2006-05-18
Posts 5

2 posted 2006-05-19 08:21 AM


aptly written.sums up one's feelings accurately.Feel like that sometime.
Excellent read.

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