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greysolace
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since 2006-03-27
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0 posted 2006-03-27 01:22 AM


Untitled

Running down a dark corridor
No end in sight
So lost
So cold
Searching for an escape
Seeing no light to guide me

How did i get here?
All i remember is falling
Through fire and water
Falling forever
With no one to catch me

Hitting bottom as they say
Nowhere to go but away
Away from the scene
That horrible scene
But it doesnt matter now
It doesnt make sense
Nothing makes sense anymore

Tears of anguish began to fall
But i make no move to stifle them
It doesnt matter now
No one’s here to catch them
To stop them, wipe them away
And tell me that everything will be okay

Where is my solace now?
With so many words wishing to spill from my soul
Does anyone know this feeling?
This feeling of loneliness?
Chaos and confusion all around me
I truly must be lost



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Deep_Inside
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since 2002-02-14
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i can't stop hiding
1 posted 2006-03-27 01:26 AM


i really liked this, i could really feel the emotion coming through
starinthedark
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since 2006-02-13
Posts 32

2 posted 2006-03-28 10:49 AM


I felt it too, and yes been there...starinthedark
SATURN
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since 2004-05-04
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ok,us
3 posted 2006-03-31 12:33 PM


You have a very deep emotion flowing from your soul's essance. LOved it hope to see more like it.

  alwayz
   ~SATURN~

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