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Cherishable_Baybee
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0 posted 2006-03-26 10:34 PM


Unanswered Questions
By: Cherishable_Baynee

There are days where I feel at ease
And days were I feel like total waste
I am a human with a broken heart
It was broken at birth
Where my papa took half
And my mama took another
I now live with my mama
Roaming the earth looking for my dark prince
He had made this being and I want to know why
Why did he leave me?
He did not love me?
Did he not love my mama?
So many questions so many unanswered questions
I lie deep beneath my shielded heart
It sadden me that my papa moved on and stole my heart
Who will love me the way he did
He must off cared for me because he made me
I want to hear about this
If not my mama nor the Lord someone please
End my pain put me at ease with my twisted life
If the Lord has a reason for all his actions
Why did he snatch my papa from me?
Why did he rob me of my rights to happiness?
My rights to have a whole family
I am innocent yet I still suffer
For somebody wrong doings
At times I cannot bear the pain
Where I turn into this melancholy child
Weary of live
I watch other families laugh and comfort each other
Then I look upon my family
And there I see only my mama to comfort me
I envy all you do not cherish have they have
For they have a complete family
Where my family is incomplete
As am I
Papa is gone and mama works hard
I question so questions
Pondering life
Why am I the way I am?
I look upon mama and ask her
“Mama where is papa ?”
My mama looks at me with pain on her face
Your papa has gone somewhere where no body know of
I cuddle in her arms for warmth and say, ”I love you mama”

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green_itchy_stuff
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1 posted 2006-03-29 08:28 PM


like tombstones without marks...

-GIS

Jesus

Cherishable_Baybee
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2 posted 2006-03-29 10:05 PM


Thanks again GIS but when you say,

"Like tombstones without marks what does that mean?"

- cherishable_Baybee -

green_itchy_stuff
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3 posted 2006-03-30 09:26 PM


There is this final monument on top of someone's dead body and its blank.  You can't even prove a body is even there...  "Unanswered Questions."  Maybe even "Unasked Questions."

Jesus

green_itchy_stuff
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4 posted 2006-04-04 06:46 PM


I was thinking and maybe I shouldn't have responded at all when you asked me what "like unmarked tombstones" meant and that would have perfectly explained it... ironic huh?

God bless,
In Christ,
=GIS

Jesus

aliway
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since 2006-03-05
Posts 185
With in your eyes
5 posted 2006-04-05 07:45 PM


Wow this was deep.
A every sad poem
You did a really great job writing it.

*leah

We seek peace, knowing that peace is the climate of freedom.

*DWIGHT D. EISENHOWER*

Cherishable_Baybee
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6 posted 2006-04-08 08:37 PM


thanks aliway i was in a sad place when i wrote this


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