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emeralddreamer
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since 2006-03-24
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0 posted 2006-03-24 10:31 PM


Hollowed spirit,
mirrored soul.
winged messenger of flight...

Doomsday's forgotten seed...

lest your existence be for naught
as you bandage your wound of dreams lost
with a torniquet of bludgeoned memories

for you see, the moon's embrace
has been the only solace of
this woman who stands before you

her image no longer recognizable,
for she resides where only spirits dwell

her soul, transparent
unable to mask the pain
while shards of regret stain crimson
across once periwinkle horizons

For icicles have taken up residence within

the shadows still summon me
on too frequent an occasion
and I've not felt the need
to bask in the rays of light

Until now...

Come with me,
let us cast aside our apprehensions
and take that final step into
the land of the living



© Copyright 2006 Josette Farah - All Rights Reserved
Cherishable_Baybee
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since 2006-01-04
Posts 57

1 posted 2006-03-26 07:35 PM


your poem was a great write too hope to read many more of your poems

---Cherishable_Baybee

desert-spike
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since 2006-02-01
Posts 194
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2 posted 2006-03-27 10:28 AM


I agree that was really well done.
greysolace
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since 2006-03-27
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3 posted 2006-03-27 08:49 PM


this is nice. very well done. *applause*

Poetry is written emotion

emeralddreamer
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since 2006-03-24
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4 posted 2006-03-28 01:43 AM


Many thanks to each of you
Alone in the dark
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5 posted 2006-06-27 11:26 PM


This is beautiful. It has a sort of haunted feeling to it. You have a lot of talent. hope to read more from you

   ^*^Angel^*^

stargal
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since 2006-03-06
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6 posted 2006-06-29 02:28 PM


Hey emeralddreamer,

Awesome first post! I loved this, and I’m going to steal what alone in the dark said and say I thought this was very haunting also. Kind of a mystical like appearance to the poem… Very cool.

lest your existence be for naught
as you bandage your wound of dreams lost
with a torniquet of bludgeoned memories”


I loved that part, when I read that it brought an interesting image to my mind… The way you worded this poem was just great!

Thanks for sharing, I’d love to see more

@-->---

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2006-06-29 03:29 PM


Josette~

I greatly enjoyed the imagery in this,
especially THIS -

'periwinkle horizons'

That is like finding poetry within a poetic piece~



*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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rockbabe
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8 posted 2006-06-29 04:26 PM


Very Nicely Witten!!
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