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Jack Straw
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since 2006-03-02
Posts 70


0 posted 2006-03-21 11:57 AM


short simple poem but I like it:

Come swim
In my pool
A pool of ignorance

What?
Oh you can’t swim?

No matter,
Everyone drowns
In pools of ignorance.

© Copyright 2006 Jack Straw - All Rights Reserved
alibaster
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since 2001-07-07
Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).
1 posted 2006-03-21 01:31 PM



OOHHHH, short and sooo TRUE!!
Thank you!!
Until...ali {the Queen of Darkness}

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."-alibaster

"If it doesn't bite, scratch, and make you bleed it isn't worth it"-alibaster

Ace of Crimson Tears
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since 2006-03-03
Posts 14
United States
2 posted 2006-04-10 12:04 PM


Ignorance drowns any who knows it. That was a good poem, short and to the point. I loved it.

Matt


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