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lostpoet25
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since 2006-03-11
Posts 6
Illinois, USA

0 posted 2006-03-11 09:05 PM



Understanding of life forever changed
Visions infected by evil untamed
Released to prey upon the weak of heart
No end to destruction once it starts
The truth is twisted to deceive
Yet still it seems hard to believe
How can dreams die before they are born?
So many unfeeling, unwilling to mourn
Left in despair, alone on the path
Forced to face your own mind's wrath
Untapped emotions entangle your soul
Left with vague thoughts of unfulfilled goals
The future is distorted by visions of death
When chaos has passed, nothing is left
Emptiness reigns, pure and complete
Still you refuse to admit defeat
For if your mind remains, wholly aware
It must mean that you have conquered your fear
So you conceive a new world, built upon dreams
Shaped by a mind that has endured unspeakable things
But just as you complete your task
Chaos breaks free and renews the attack.

© Copyright 2006 Josh Blight - All Rights Reserved
byski
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since 2006-01-26
Posts 235
Alberta, Canada
1 posted 2006-03-12 10:37 PM


Excellent poem and first post. What a way to start it. I will enjoy reading more of your work in the near future I hope.
eor
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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
2 posted 2006-03-14 03:02 PM


"how can dreams die before they are born"

love that line.

A cange is going to come...

sgreybe
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since 2000-04-28
Posts 209
London, UK
3 posted 2006-03-18 06:05 AM


Hey buddy
Good to see you over this side too!  You work is great, I will continue to look for it.  Cheers.
Sylvia

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4 posted 2006-03-19 12:24 PM


Excellent first post.  Welcome to Pip!!

~Alli~

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