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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2006-03-10 05:22 PM



I've never done this before
What am I talking about?
The winter and early spring are cold
Luckily no rain for now

This is about you
Its about freedom
Everything that ties you down
Not my face in the EMP
Save yourself from misery
You don't have to waste your life
Save and live happily

I love you friend and I don't know why
You pain drives me crazy
I love you friend and I don't know why
Your pain drives me crazy
Lost in insanity
Your pain dreves me crazy
So don't hurt in the key of "G"

Its not conventional what I do
A sheep in the grass before the son
Something frozen, I figured as much
Maybe its just something brighter for you
You should've read all of this by now
Lay hold of the world, Jesus, don't loose yourself...

Jesus

© Copyright 2006 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
eor
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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
1 posted 2006-03-14 02:22 PM


intresting, a lot going on in this one, it seems like you are addressing a few people, or maybe just one with a few sides. enjoyed it.

A cange is going to come...

sevencrimson
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since 2006-03-14
Posts 3

2 posted 2006-03-14 02:45 PM


That is a very caring poem. I can tell you care alot about the person your talking to.
green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
3 posted 2006-03-21 07:53 PM


My friend Kris.  She's a  teen-something and sorta homeless and drinks alcohol, I think she smokes pot, and she could do alot better with her life if she made a few different choices.

God bless,
In Christ,
-Craig

Thank you.

Jesus

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