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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2006-03-06 07:31 PM


  
Me in all my glory
I toss a bone to the truth
And I don't give you what you want
Its only impartial, because I think about me
In all my glory

Jesus, what should I do?
Fools always have lots to say
The people don't care about doing what’s right
As long as it feels good
And there are no excuses
They just don't want to obey
These god-like creatures saying "God is dead" will die
Apart from you Lord, I'm nothing
In the eyes of man, with You, I'm nothing

The words to this song sound nice so far
Only under your blessings could they
What I do and what I want
Are usually different than I first thought...
Useless bum, I just can't help you

These will be taken into account
Those who see, hear, and don't care
At the final judgement before our God
When its your turn tell God "Craig says hello and thank you."


Jesus

[This message has been edited by green_itchy_stuff (03-07-2006 08:36 PM).]

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tatalinia
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since 2005-12-17
Posts 137
CA, US
1 posted 2006-03-06 07:48 PM


really liked this poem. very true indeed about people doing only what feels good etc

I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health

Cherishable_Baybee
Member
since 2006-01-04
Posts 57

2 posted 2006-03-06 08:24 PM


I really like this poem i hope to read more poems=D


sgreybe
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since 2000-04-28
Posts 209
London, UK
3 posted 2006-03-14 08:17 AM


Hey there my friend.  It has been a while... what a fantastic piece for me to come back to.  As always, your talent astounds.  Great work!  
Love Sylvia

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
4 posted 2006-03-14 01:48 PM


Hey, great!  Thank you.  Wow, so what's London like?  And your name... I always for some reason thought you were a dude... sorry.  

God bless,
In Christ,
-GIS

Jesus

eor
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since 2002-09-26
Posts 959
blues & greys
5 posted 2006-03-14 02:16 PM


ah greeny, you have changed up your syle since i last saw, i like it, powerful, to say the least.  good write, i am going to have to go back and see what i missed.

Awake through motion with curiosity to curtain your first move
Over arms length they'll break protocol
Jealous envy for the youngest one

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
6 posted 2006-03-17 07:49 PM


Lots and lots of stuff.  Been busy.  Moved about 3 times (to different states) and had about 6-7 different jobs.

-GIS

Jesus

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