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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2006-03-04 04:21 PM



When its cols outside and there's no where to sleep
I'm out
Clarity working to be so crystal clear
I almost understand
I can almost see
The fear leaves
And I see you...

Fearfully and wonderfully
Your place and where you are
You're so beautiful
Masterpiece of God's creation
I can see why he would die for you
Even dirty silver just needs to be cleaned

Use, my favorite tools
Formed from nothing
Sword collector
Collector of them all
Weilding the sword
Its a cornerstone
And rejected silver burns

Who hates you?
Why do they dare?
Struggling to hate you all their life
Amidst insuing punishment
Robbing themselves of your love
They rot like dead trees
To be eatten by the worm

Ashes of them that flow away
Like trees loosing leaves in Autumn
The gentle breaks writhing pain
And there's always more
Plenty of death for eternity
Exchange of love for misery
What a pity...

Jesus

© Copyright 2006 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
desert-spike
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since 2006-02-01
Posts 194
TX/USA
1 posted 2006-03-04 04:43 PM


Aside for a couple of typos, it's pretty cute.
green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
2 posted 2006-03-08 05:36 PM


Yeah, sorry about the typos.  I'll try harder next time... lol.

God bless,
In Christ,
-Craig

Jesus

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