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byski
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since 2006-01-26
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Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2006-03-03 07:36 PM



Do you want to see what its like to be me?
To know infinity
For an advantage to see
That no one can know
What you really mean to me

Can’t you see!!

So long and goodbye
Hello sweet butterfly
As I’m welcome to try
My hand as you fly by

I see you die!!

Ohhhhhhhhhh………. My


I can’t go on                          I don’t belong
                       I won’t go on                           It all is wrong

Our favourite song goes on and on………..
Do you know where I am coming from?

Can you see what it is like to be me?
Or have you tried most defiantly?
Been trapped and held and eventually broke free?
My friend we will see each other in eternity.


(this is a test of the structure, that one stanza may not read correctly)

Unorthodox mabey, but I grow on you.

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