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Dark Poetry #4

Cracked Open Door

tatalinia
Member

since 2005-12-17

Posts 137
CA, US

0 posted 2006-02-25 05:14 PM

this journey you walk with me
what is it you want from me
that you dare to try this with me
dare to try and keep up with me

as i rest in your arms night an day
see the things you do for me
how can i resist your love
its like you were sent from heaven above

always been the picky type
nick picking over things i dont like
til i met you i put things on hold
never in my life trying something so bold

not sure what it is i want in you
not sure is it just me trying something new
in the end will i throw it away
an move on my way ?

who knows for i question my heart
not sure will i tear us apart
when my tempor errupts
leaving what i need so much

i can never be to sure
for my cracked open hearts door
is opening again today
but still i try so hard to run away

in the end who knows what we will be
just enjoy today the you and me
for when your having fun it goes by so quickly
an dont say i never warned you of who im wickedly

I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health

brother stone
Junior Member

since 2006-01-25

Posts 28

1 posted 2006-02-27 09:25 AM

i'm glad i read this because i am sad from this very same thing on the man's side. my lady is so much this with me, here and somewhere else and then here again. brother stone thought she could have been the one writing the poem.

i will try to do what you said in the last verse. maybe thats the way.

xFromtheHeartx
Member

since 2005-09-24

Posts 80
Florida U.S.

2 posted 2006-02-27 07:15 PM

wow,truely... amazing? i loved this piece. i can relate to this somewhat. me and my girlfriend never fight about what we dont like, but we have out spats about her not letting me pay. but yes, this truely was a good write. im looking foward to seeing more from you, peace

Darkness fallows the currupted Martyr...

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