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xFromtheHeartx
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since 2005-09-24
Posts 80
Florida U.S.

0 posted 2006-02-25 05:05 PM



Lonely Friday Night


Shes sitting in the dark, on a lonely friday night  13
Waiting for the phone to ring, so she can end this silly fight  15
But she knows he'll never call, and its the last they'll ever be  15
And she can only wonder why, god why did he leave me  13
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She wants to go sleep, and hope it all was just a dream  13
And awake the next morning, to find nothings as it seems  14
But she cannot live a lie, even though it'd be the best  14
And she can't find the strenght, to lay down and get some rest  13
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Oh baby why, did you do this to me  10
I can't find one reason, to not love you, don't you see  13
Cause I'll be here, won't you please come back and be  11
The one I've always known, to fully complete me  12
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Shes starring at the clock, remembering their last kiss  13
Remembering the only face, she would ever care to miss  15
And she knows now, who she cannot live without  11
The man of her dreams, he was the one and theres no doubt  12
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Oh baby why, do you do what you do  10
I can't find one reason, to live a life without you  13
And I'll be here, won't you please come back to me  11
And show me the love, that can truely be  10
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Shes sitting on her couch, waiting out this silly fight  13
And hears her phone ringing, on this lonely friday night  13
And it is him, he speaks so softly in the phone  12
And she just can't help it, to have the forgiveness shes always shown  16
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Oh baby please, can you just forgive me  10
I can't find one reason, to not love you believe me  13
And I'm here now, I just cancled my flight  10
Oh baby forgive me, for this lonely friday night  13
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2-25-06

*note* its been forever people... i know none of you remember me and all, but im posting on this site again. hope you guys enjoy my work, this is one of my newer pieces. thanks for reading. peace


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tatalinia
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since 2005-12-17
Posts 137
CA, US
1 posted 2006-02-25 05:38 PM


this was a awesome poem, it would make a good song.

I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health

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