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deadkiss
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since 2006-02-11
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washington

0 posted 2006-02-25 01:40 AM



From mist and black remains
A nose-piercing stench
Bleeding veins of death
Decapitating lungs, and mortality

Fire burning breath
Emanates the air
Nostrils filled with lust
Hidden with desire

Two paths ahead remain
You follow to the dark
Casting away the light
From heaven's fading shadow

Autumn leaves turn to black
As roses grow their thorns
The slightest prick bleeds
From the most precious flower

Widows dance tonight
Upon their husbands graves
Living with there victory
With no heaven's tears

Lilith my pretty goddess
Twirling in the night
Defying Adams wishes
To spend with me this night

Adam’s first lover
Before eve was ever born
Has left him in betrayal
Wishing death into my lungs

Wizards, and warlocks are born
Vampires rise from graves
The sukkubus sleeps softly
Dreaming in my bed

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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2006-02-25 03:34 PM


Sounds like an unhappily married man... lol.

God bless,
In Christ,
-GIS

I feel better knowing Jesus was rejected at Nazereth... mom, dad... everyone else...

deadkiss
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since 2006-02-11
Posts 31
washington
2 posted 2006-02-28 02:20 AM


lol it's based on the theory of how vampires were created and such.
green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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New Caney, Tx
3 posted 2006-02-28 02:49 PM


I see I see.  vamps do have some attitude.

God bless,
In Chirst,
-Craig

I feel better knowing Jesus was rejected at Nazereth... mom, dad... everyone else...

Cherishable_Baybee
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since 2006-01-04
Posts 57

4 posted 2006-03-09 07:12 PM


I  enjoyed reading this poem buh wat most attracted my to this poem is the title i love the vampric attitude of Lilith and how she was involed with Adam i hope to read more....
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