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kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
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0 posted 2006-02-22 06:20 PM



Whats your poison?
Is it a liquid or a gas?
a powder, a solid?
How long does it last?

Intoxicated,
I feel so violated
as the poison,
The poison of my choice,
overpowers,
and smothers my voice.

Nobody hears,
as the poison flows free.
Nobody cares,
as it slowly kills me.

Yet still...
we do this willingly.

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

© Copyright 2006 Karissa - All Rights Reserved
deadkiss
Junior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 31
washington
1 posted 2006-02-25 01:33 AM


ahh everyone has there own poisons, nicely written. i like the ending. i also like the how long does it last part.
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