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UseTheIllusion
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since 2006-02-06
Posts 223
In a state of limbo

0 posted 2006-02-22 02:20 PM



Summon the emotion,
Of despairs cold kiss,
Plans set in motion,
All were hit or miss.
A shot in the dark,
Never hits its mark,
All futures are stark,
Watch the hands on the clock.
All good intentions,
Never come to fruition,
Never recognized,
Leads to sedition,
Repetition,
Competition,
Renditions of the past,
Experience aghast,
Disbelief,
No relief,
But at least there are the facts,
Seen clearly enough by all,
It is all I can do to stand tall,
When everyone I know is praying for my fall,
Now is the winter of my discontent,
Got another year to go,
Before I bother with it.

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deadkiss
Junior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 31
washington
1 posted 2006-02-25 01:35 AM


this was rather well written with alot of strong words, full of pain. you seem to have a pretty good vocabulary.
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