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Dark Poetry #4

Tell The Truth

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2006-02-18 02:04 PM

Princess beauty lullaby
Gentle breach the dragonfly
Harness an emptyness unknown
Rolling power where the glory shines

I'm just a regular guy
A baldheaded eagle in my heart
And he lifts up and does mighty things
Its under Him... firm

A world without God is dead already
I'm tired, crystal clear
What they told me
Its a pivot point

A slice of me
Here you go
The best I can
Look at Jesus first

I feel better knowing Jesus was rejected at Nazereth... mom, dad... everyone else...

desert-spike
Member

since 2006-02-01

Posts 194
TX/USA

1 posted 2006-02-18 05:51 PM

Hey that's pretty potent stuff.

I found the ending particualtly striking.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2006-02-23 05:25 PM

beautiful.
i havent been here in a while. i've missed your writtings.
and i love the critique message you left. did you write that yourself?
i bet you did.

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

3 posted 2006-02-25 03:32 PM

Yeah thank guys. My writting has slowed down a bit. I'm busier than I used to be, alot more busy.

and yes, I did write my signature myself... the way my brain works sometimes...

-GIS

I feel better knowing Jesus was rejected at Nazereth... mom, dad... everyone else...

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