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desert-spike
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since 2006-02-01
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0 posted 2006-02-16 04:39 PM



"DEVIL'S BLOOD"

Eyes of purest shadow, in direct sunlight
Hypnotize with hidden intention
Dark hearted hunter, bathed in radiant beauty  
Iron wrought claws
Stinging as ice
Slicing my essence
To rift and to rend
Weakening an already strained resistance
Black fire awaits
Smoldering in thy passion soul Seek to enslave
Kill my love
A dangerous bliss
Condemning grace
Evil mind
Devil's blood runs deep through cold veins
The blood is the drug, the addictive poison
Making me burn down to the core

In the cruel ecstasy of your wicked desire
You hunt to entrap
Live for the thrill
To torment the kill
A prophecy to appease, a hunger to feed
Come full circle
I give up a figurehead religion, and fall to my knees To serve your creature within

***
I wrote this sometime in the month of October, in the year 1995.

© Copyright 2006 Gabriel T. Unbehaun - All Rights Reserved
deadkiss
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since 2006-02-11
Posts 31
washington
1 posted 2006-02-16 08:54 PM


alot of great vocabulary, an awsome vampire write. don't think i can think of anything really constructive, but it was a pleasure to read.
desert-spike
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since 2006-02-01
Posts 194
TX/USA
2 posted 2006-02-17 03:45 PM


Thankyou deadkiss
byski
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since 2006-01-26
Posts 235
Alberta, Canada
3 posted 2006-02-19 01:31 PM


Once again a good write. You must put a good amount of time into your writing. I'm sure you made a few new fans with this.
Cherishable_Baybee
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since 2006-01-04
Posts 57

4 posted 2006-02-27 09:19 PM


This is a gewd poem i can also relate to this poem...ill try to read more of your poems
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