A Worthless Being(The End)

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Dark Poetry #4

A Worthless Being(The End)

deadkiss
Junior Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 31
washington

0 posted 2006-02-14 08:03 PM

A Worthless Being(The End)

A worthless being of filth
A creature created of garbage
Sitting with head in hand

Birds peck at his hair
Maggots crawl in his mouth
Beetles erupt from his chest

Tattered clothes cover
The remains of a man
Who once was living

Eyes burn hot red
A demon’s horns emerge
Out of hatred life is born

The man walks
Bringing with disease
A plague of men

Farmers’ lands are tainted
Rats are in the fields
Black skies bleed acid rain

The apocalypse is now
Satan walks the earth
As angels hide above

Earth’s darkest hour here
As god sit and watch
Like ants beneath the lens

What if we were
Someone’s experiment
In little glass cages

An experiment gone wrong
Or so this world would seem
As chaos roams and death is know

Prepare for the end
Gather your lost hopes
Pack your shattered dreams

Throw them in the fire
Never to see again
Now it’s gone.. All is gone..
Despair

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

1 posted 2006-02-15 04:47 PM

Dark but very descriptive, i like

Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free
-i wrote it somewhere in time

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

2 posted 2006-02-16 05:58 AM

You described it so real that it scares me a little there. lol

Enjoyed it.

rockbabe
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 105

3 posted 2006-02-16 07:23 AM

Vey Graphic..I liked it

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

4 posted 2006-02-16 04:34 PM

Definitely belongs in dark... I like the flow and unfolding. As far as content. Rather angels don't actually hide, but stand back obediently while what must occurs.

God bless,
In Christ,
-GIS

So what if my wings are too scratched, cut, and beat up to fly... I'll walk.

deadkiss
Junior Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 31
washington

5 posted 2006-02-16 08:51 PM

thank you everyone for the comments. this one sort of scared a friend of mine a little on another site as well.

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