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jane_kiedis
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since 2006-02-04
Posts 38
Philippines

0 posted 2006-02-12 04:11 PM


  Angel



     



A lost city that’s doomed



Drifted souls tagged damned



Darkness felt within reach



Creatures lurks behind each





Demon, vampire, mortal



One came from a portal



Not to just wander ‘round



But to make trap hell-bound





And he who hates day light



Has chosen to fight sprite



The vampire with a soul



Now known for a great role





Clashed even his own kind



Only to save mankind



Ironic it may seem



Nobody hears his scream





Yet his heart remained pure



Became the key and cure



Helped redeemed the city



That once was in fury




© Copyright 2006 Jane Valerie Galgana Esplana - All Rights Reserved
deadkiss
Junior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 31
washington
1 posted 2006-02-12 05:04 PM


a nice story line.
Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
2 posted 2006-02-13 12:54 PM


jane_kiedis as in Anthony Kiedis? Of the Chilis?

Are you a fan?

I am. (hugely).

Hollow.
Courts.

P.S. Good poem. I likey.

Come on God, do I seem bulletproof?

jane_kiedis
Junior Member
since 2006-02-04
Posts 38
Philippines
3 posted 2006-02-13 08:49 AM


yeah i am a huge fan as well....lol

i love everything about the chilis c",)

thanks for appreciatin' my poem c",)

*much love*

psychic spies from China tries to steal your mind's elation

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