Fading but still Fighting (depression)

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Dark Poetry #4

Fading but still Fighting (depression)

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

0 posted 2006-02-11 04:58 AM

It is my wish to die in my sleep.
As the torture of nothingness haunts me..

The night frightens me,
I curled up and pray,

Oh Lord, take me, for I am frail.
The day tires me and the night frightens me.

What is there to look forward?
Except for the day of release,
from the jail of sufferings.

My mind calls out to me.
"Look around, family and friends embrace.
Be glad, content and gay."

I try but I fail.
My heart doesn't feel.

My mood surfs on the angry waves.
Up and down so much that I want to suffocate.

I long for a quiet sleep....
forever,
How blessed indeed.

deadkiss
Junior Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 31
washington

1 posted 2006-02-11 09:23 PM

things ive thought and felt many times myself. there are some spots where i think you can take out some words so it flows better. other then that it's good.

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

2 posted 2006-02-11 10:44 PM

Hi deadkiss,

Where do you suggest i take out the words?

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