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UseTheIllusion
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since 2006-02-06
Posts 223
In a state of limbo

0 posted 2006-02-08 08:20 PM



Battle cry,
Its time to die,
Run through the forest
Guns blazing tonight,
No strategy needed
Arguments heated
People the way they are
You’ve just been deleted,
A rallying point,
A breath of air,
An ego boost,
Just say it without a care,
Believe me,
The (blank) would just as soon dare,
To bring the knife to the back
As to give one a blank stare.
Conflict is always a bitch,
Exponentially magnified
When the voices keep you hitched
A marriage to yourself
Drags you down,
Ain’t that rich?
So this is a battle cry,
A heated debate,
Between me and myself,
Whether or not to go out in the rain,
The options are simple,
To fight or flee
It’s the same to me,
Its time to die
And let the bullets fly,
With one hand tied behind our backs
We give life a (blank)slap
And send her on her way.
Doublespeak,
Groupthink
Orwell was right,
Big brother is here
Like skating on ice
Obscured without a ring,
So that is all I have to say
To live and try,
And find your own battle cry.  

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iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2006-02-11 02:49 PM


understanding this; another good one
xFromtheHeartx
Member
since 2005-09-24
Posts 80
Florida U.S.
2 posted 2006-03-02 10:26 PM


very nice write, talent is shown in your work. im looking foward to reading more!

( very nice rhyme scheme )

Darkness fallows the currupted Martyr...

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