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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2006-02-01 06:15 PM



Grass grows slow
And doesn't live long
The day grass dies
It goes away

They see me
Insider tight squeeze
Pinch inside bloody choke
I'm not Jesus

Rockstar back from the dead
Its an honor to know you
Tenor strangle jerked below
Clever, clever isn't it?

Sheep in the flock
Wanna play?  Get some sleep in the playpen
I'm so gentle and nice
I move like a cloud

Harsh clouds that rain in Newberg
Flocks of angels with fluttering wings all at once
Gold goblets for us to share
Drink and share coffee burning

Fires and rot
Corrosive collapse
Dangling on a chord of death
Covered by the grass and a rock

So what if my wings are too scratched, cut, and beat up to fly... I'll walk.

© Copyright 2006 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
Hollow_Emptiness
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 715
New Zealand
1 posted 2006-02-04 12:47 PM


I move like a cloud too.

Cool write. Wicked title and first stanza.

Layers. ( , I've never said layers before).

Hollow.
Courts.

Come on God, do I seem bulletproof?

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
2 posted 2006-02-06 06:28 PM


Layers of what...?

God bless,
-GIS

So what if my wings are too scratched, cut, and beat up to fly... I'll walk.

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