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rockbabe
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since 2006-01-29
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0 posted 2006-01-30 08:19 AM


As we grow up we never know what life has instore.
As we age we think ageing will be our biggest problem.
That love is what it is...... love.....wonderful.

We dream of happiness,we long for peace.
We make mistakes that can never be rectifies.
Mistakes that can never be erased,No matter how much we wish for it to be.

By the time we find what we have been searching for all our lives, the unthinkable occurs.
The past has creeped up from behind and ripped my heart out.

The only thing that could ever distance me from my partner has happened.......


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kitvb1
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since 2006-01-23
Posts 28
Trebgast, Germany
1 posted 2006-01-30 02:29 PM


Unluckily life is like that. When you're up, it only lasts for a short while before something major happens to disturb the balance. Your past is your past´and we all do things we regret later in life. Your partner should try to understand that no matter how much you regret what you did for whatever reason, your life started anew once you became attached to each other. I hope it works out for you. Kit

We've all been there. How we deal with it determines our paths.

kitvb1@hotmail.com

Kaos
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since 2001-08-02
Posts 317
between space and time
2 posted 2006-01-31 11:11 AM


good first post with a very heartfelt piece, welcome to PiP

Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free
-i wrote it somewhere in time

rockbabe
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since 2006-01-29
Posts 105

3 posted 2006-02-17 08:49 AM


thanks for your comments guy..greatly appreciately!
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