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Cherishable_Baybee
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since 2006-01-04
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0 posted 2006-01-28 02:46 PM


Loneliness
By: Cherishable_Me

In this dark time of despair
I lie awake in my bed
Thinking about the times that gone to waste
As tears run down my face

A shade of hatred that I recall
While watching my father hit my skull
I heard my mother’s cries
While she slowly watches me die

My father left me and mother
With so many questions to wonder?
Was it something I did?
Was it something I didn’t do?

As I got older the moment was right
I left my mother on a cold snowy night
With so many wounds from the past
A head full of bad memories
That I just couldn’t bear

I leave behind so many broken dreams
And so many people
All from my past
But now I live in the present

Where there one lonely peasant
Until an angel from above approaches
And she leads out her hand
I never been happy and sad at the same time

I gladly go with her without no question or doubt
Im thinking it is time to retire
from this wretched earth
But no, instead, she shows me my mother
I watch her cry night after night

Her heart was stolen as so was mine
I look down on her shoulders
And do the same as the angel has done
I lead out my hand, as I see her smile
As I say
I wouldn’t give up this moment because it worthwhile

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sgreybe
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since 2000-04-28
Posts 209
London, UK
1 posted 2006-01-28 10:18 PM


Awesome powerful stuff.  What guts that took.
kitvb1
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since 2006-01-23
Posts 28
Trebgast, Germany
2 posted 2006-01-29 02:15 PM


Thank you for sharing, TY
Kit

We've all been there. How we deal with it determines our paths.

kitvb1@hotmail.com

Cherishable_Baybee
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since 2006-01-04
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3 posted 2006-02-02 12:03 PM


yeah it gave me a lot of pressure when i wrote this but im glad that i did....
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