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Cherishable_Baybee
Member

since 2006-01-04

Posts 57

0 posted 2006-01-27 10:40 PM

Lost in Time
By: Cherishable_Me

Did you every wonder
Or get a funny feeling that you’re lost?
A place in time that you know your suppose to be
But for some odd reason
You’re in a different time and place
Did you every question
Why your fascinations come true in your dreams
Wanting you to never wake up
Because you don’t want leave
A place where you can be yourself
And shatter that vulgar image you once created.
When you finally think you have
That perfect moment that occurs once in your lifetime
Just like that little taste of heaven
Something unexpected happens
You wake up and realize that it was a only dream
Crying and wishing that it was reality
But it was only a fantasy
A dream waiting to come true

SATURN
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 78
ok,us

1 posted 2006-02-10 12:42 PM

We have all been there its a horrible feeling, but we in time over come it.
nice write I'll try to read more of your poems.

~Hali~

ManOfWolves28
Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 83

2 posted 2006-02-10 02:20 PM

So many times Ive been in dream land and dint want to wake up. Unknown or unexplained feelings tend to be signs that you may be in the spotlight soon. At least thats something Ive learned over time. It's like anticipation with visual assistance.
Great little poem to read.

...If you choose not to decide you still have made a choice.

rockbabe
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 105

3 posted 2006-02-17 08:48 AM

many of us have felt this way..some more so then others.
Good One!

Cherishable_Baybee
Member

since 2006-01-04

Posts 57

4 posted 2006-03-06 08:20 PM

Thanks a lot i feel like this many times...sometimes i wonder why the 21st century why not the 16th century but God has a plan for everyone right.

cinnabar
Junior Member

since 2006-03-10

Posts 33
Lot et Garonne, France.

5 posted 2006-03-10 10:59 AM

Lovely poem. Only when our time and place are out of joint can we write this stuff. Happy, or poet? Tough choice. Hope you're right about God. Wish he'd hurry up. Keep writing. You're good.
Cinnabar.

Astrogirl18
Junior Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 16
Canada

6 posted 2006-05-03 08:28 AM

~I totally agree~

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