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tatalinia
Member

since 2005-12-17

Posts 137
CA, US

0 posted 2006-01-27 05:08 PM

an angel she was flowing like the morning rain

destroying hearts as she past through

voice sang out tunes making even women bow

her breathe of life lifting those up for a small season

shuting them down in the end

taking the long route home you die in your mind

no longer can you move you are paralyzed

on the road again bag on your shoulders

dead to the world to the way things are of the now

another prey she has captured feeding to her children

in the nest they await to eat off your hurting soul

captured by those piercing eyes that dug deep inside you

being torn apart from left to right

forgeting to fight back you succumb to your death

falling into their pit into their mouths they destroy you

she stands watching til you are gone

then shes off for another one

knowing you will find no other as she

she is off to find another to feed

opening mouths starving souls await for her in line

men fighting women crying saying

sing to me your lullaby

crying to the night your body rings

pushing away everything that might help

bring you back to life

you scorn the true being of truth

into a web of the pit i have fallen

for her love and charm i to am hurting

she is drinking my life away

taking everything i need today

sepperated by an angel of evil

you lock yourself inside her wings

as she drinks me up and takes my dreams

falling apart we will forever be

i fight for what i need so much

but she has won the battle she has won

now im thrown into the dungeon

that so many others have gone as well

to fight for the right to love you still

I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

1 posted 2006-01-27 06:49 PM

Yeah, love is pretty intense.

God bless,
-GIS

So what if my wings are too scratched, cut, and beat up to fly... I'll walk.

sanozatsho
Junior Member

since 2006-01-26

Posts 14

2 posted 2006-01-29 04:38 PM

yes, life is a long tough journey. love only complicates it. though, this love can be a tool to help you through, to continue on. to fight, not only in life but in love as well.
very nice description of an anti angel. perhaps though you could have gone in to detail as to what she looked like. not just her acts.

tatalinia
Member

since 2005-12-17

Posts 137
CA, US

3 posted 2006-01-29 07:53 PM

i left the rest of the poem for the reader to paint, let them make her into whatever their mind sees .

I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health

rockbabe
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 105

4 posted 2006-01-31 05:01 AM

I think that you poem is very well expressed....very well done!!I could see your pain.

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

5 posted 2006-01-31 11:22 AM

Excellent. Love is not just difficult but it is also a beautiful feeling and just, mere existence when you are in love.

Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free
-i wrote it somewhere in time

SATURN
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 78
ok,us

6 posted 2006-02-10 12:38 PM

Great write love is a powerful thing loved it
~Hali~

deadkiss
Junior Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 31
washington

7 posted 2006-02-11 09:41 PM

reminds me of a previous relationship. beautifully written, i think the only way out of the cell is for someone to come along with the key. and set you free.

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