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silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

0 posted 2006-01-24 08:37 PM

i've taken my time
to let you know
just how hard it was
to see you with her
both smiling
feeling amazing
and looking even better
with her beautiful elegance
and your sudden mature, stunning resemblance
of a boy i thought i once knew

so what brings us all together
in the same room again
used to be anticipated with excitement
but is now with resentment
as i watch you take her hand
and pull her close
as your bodies move in sync
together and melodic
to the song that i once thought as ours

it made me imagine how it'd feel
to be that close to you
so i turned away
gripping my sleeves
biting my lip to prolong tears
and ran outside
careless of the rain
running
barefoot on the gravel
down the road to the forest
through the forest to the river
till i came to the one spot
i knew i could forget
so i took my clothes off
and i jumped
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
.
the icy water shed me of all feeling
so i got out to retrieve my clothes
and make my way back
to where you never noticed i'd even gone

can you find me space inside your bleeding heart?

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

1 posted 2006-01-24 10:02 PM

what a powerful sense of longing!

'the icy water shed me of all feeling'

i loved that line! excellent write

Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free
-i wrote it somewhere in time

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

2 posted 2006-01-25 12:50 PM

I love you.

I want you to promise me that you won't stop writing. Ok? Promise me that.

I always seem to find a magical quality about your writing. This one was just painful. I hug you lots. I'll see you soon beautiful.

Courts.
Hollow.
(And just for you), Aggs.

"Elivis dust, magic and charisma that you can't intellectualize or deconstruct." - To steal the words of Vince Vaughn.

Come on God, do I seem bulletproof?

vampiana
Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere

3 posted 2006-01-25 02:45 AM

perfection.

The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return.

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

4 posted 2006-01-25 03:17 AM

i know ive been there hahaha ouch. *winces*

perfect, as kurst sed. this is perfect.

captured every emotion that would fit with this theme

never stop. you're far too good to stop.

love you.

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

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