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kitvb1
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since 2006-01-23
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Trebgast, Germany

0 posted 2006-01-23 04:02 PM



Life.

Time passes,
suns fade,
darkness smothers.

Empty roads,
lost souls,
going nowhere.

Quiet solidarity,
memories flare,
times yearned.

Crowded loneliness,
no-one loves.
Is there end?

Silently,
slowly,
I die.

(c)Kit
19 May 1998

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2006-01-23 07:44 PM


Kit~
Welcome to PiP~

Each penning of thought is meant to be shared with someone ... you've picked a great circle of poetic friends with which to share them~

Will look forward to reading more of you~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Kaos
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since 2001-08-02
Posts 317
between space and time
2 posted 2006-01-24 10:23 AM


This was a good write, short, sweet, and emotionally present. i enjoyed the read, thanks for sharing and Welcome to PiP

Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free
-i wrote it somewhere in time

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