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blaxx
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since 2006-01-21
Posts 8
Australia

0 posted 2006-01-21 07:43 AM


Sorry God

I feel paralysed;
unable to call out to You.

Why are my eyes wandering to my pencil case...?

Feel the love generation

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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2006-01-23 02:04 AM


You're looking for your eraser so you can write praise and tell him thank you and he can bless you.  In other words letting Jesus do the work.

God bless,
-GIS

So what if my wings are too scratched, cut, and beat up to fly... I'll walk.

Kaos
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since 2001-08-02
Posts 317
between space and time
2 posted 2006-01-25 01:49 PM


short and to the point. i like pieces that use few words to make a very powerful and prudent statement, good job

Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free
-i wrote it somewhere in time

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