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Dark Poetry #4

Even Saddness has friends

Skil213
New Member

since 2006-01-13

Posts 5

0 posted 2006-01-13 11:00 PM

You greet me in the morning
and follow me through my day
you hang over my shoulder
and im sure your here to stay
you have no heart, brain or a pulse
yet with me, it seems you have a mind of your own
in fact sometims I think you are clearly right
and that is the case, your my only friend tonight
although i'd like to say that i havent seen you in awhile
the truth is you hide behind every smile
but this time is different, you brought friends that seem like there here to stay
you dont even introduce them because i already know there names
lonelyness and depression
see even sadness has friends, but not me

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2006-01-13 11:51 PM

Skil~

Welcome to PiP ... I believe you'll find many poetic friends here to chase the depression right away~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

2 posted 2006-01-17 11:09 AM

BEautiful first post. I enjoyed the portrayal of the emotions being conscious of themselves, it gave the piece a unique character. Welcome to PiP also, look forward to reading more

Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free
-i wrote it somewhere in time

kitvb1
Junior Member

since 2006-01-23

Posts 28
Trebgast, Germany

3 posted 2006-01-25 06:29 AM

Truly wonderfull, it describes exactly what all of us feel at some stage or another. Thank you.

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