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coyote
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0 posted 2006-01-10 07:33 PM



Irish coffee and silence
remind me why she left
to baptize the world
with her fire and ice

I just thought it would be different
waking up on the bank is not the same
as walking on the water
or through the fire

they say you will know instinctively
how to tread repentance
but no man knows
how deep the blisters
or frost will bite

the whiskey tells me
if the demons are gone in the morning
it was just a bad dream

"Only the dead, have seen the end of war."
Plato

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coyote
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1 posted 2006-01-12 09:21 PM


Damn.....
lost in translation, LOL!

"Only the dead, have seen the end of war."
Plato

Kaos
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since 2001-08-02
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2 posted 2006-01-24 10:29 AM


It had a very interesting tone to it in my head. A sense of confusion and loss. The whiskey'll always make it seem like a bad dream though lol  thanks for the post, i enjoyed the read

Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free
-i wrote it somewhere in time

coyote
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3 posted 2006-01-24 05:48 PM


Hey Thank You, Kaos for the reply!

CB 8)

"Only the dead, have seen the end of war."
Plato

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