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ska babe
Member

since 2005-11-08

Posts 58
nowwhere, IN

0 posted 2006-01-10 05:55 PM

I’m bleeding from the inside out
But no one cares. No one listens
I cry out in pain
But still no one comes

I stat to cry the tears of blood
And still no one cares
For I am a person no one loves
And I am a person that no one could ever love

My tears of blood are running down my checks
Further and further they fall
They will not stop
They will not fade
For the tears of blood are made this way

People watch me as I cry
But they all just sit there and stare
With there black little eyes
For if you cry the tears of blood you are gone

No one can hear you
No one understands what’s going on
And if they did
They would still just sit there
And stare with there black little eyes

"I am the one who has to die when it's my time to die, so I'm gonna live life the way I wanna"- Jimi Hendrix

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

1 posted 2006-01-10 10:09 PM

Hey, at least the entire eye isn't black. Beady eyes are pretty crappy though. E-mail me if you ever want anyone to cheer you up. I'm an expert on doing things you'll laugh at and not with... Good poem. You know Jesus cares irregardless what arrogance says.

-GIS

So what if my wings are too scratched, cut, and beat up to fly... I'll walk.

EagletonDiva
Member

since 2006-01-11

Posts 107

2 posted 2006-01-12 10:52 AM

I lived in this spot for eighteen years before I finally let Jesus pick me up. You captured the feelings well.

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

3 posted 2006-01-17 11:12 AM

excellent piece, very well wrtiien and expressed. Life is tough sometimes, i battled with this for a while... but trust in that things do get better if you keep hope of a brighter day. Thank you for sharing, good write.

Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free
-i wrote it somewhere in time

kitvb1
Junior Member

since 2006-01-23

Posts 28
Trebgast, Germany

4 posted 2006-01-23 03:58 PM

Unluckily most people either don't want to get involved, or don't know how to show that that they care. Try to trust someone, you might be surprised. I wish you well.

sanozatsho
Junior Member

since 2006-01-26

Posts 14

5 posted 2006-01-31 12:26 PM

very good. good flow, structure and words. you conveyed your feeling very well.
though i look at her with black eyes, i say it to her face, love yourself and i will love you.

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