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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever 
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Beautiful will hurt you Beautiful will bleed Beautiful will tear your heart and plant it's ugly seed. Beautiful, it hates you. Beautiful will kill. Beautiful, you'll hate it it when you didn't know you will Beautiful is ugly Ugly, and alone And many suffer horribly from hairy seeds that it has sown Beautiful is emptyness So wretchedly cliche I hope I dont read "beautiful" on any poems I read today Beautiful is garbage a wretched, ugly slit a bulbous roll of blistered flesh just pure and utter [edited by Moderator] There are many great people in the world, but real people are one in a million. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-08-2006 04:45 PM).] |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Oh, so cool. Dig the rythm and the choice of words. The point you made was awesome. I loved it. (Pity it was edited,  )Hollow. Courts. Come on God, do I seem bulletproof? |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
very cool direction with this, i loved the idea behind it and i agree with Hollow, the word choice was well layed out as well. Enjoyed much! thanks Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free |
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