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Cherishable_Baybee
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since 2006-01-04
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0 posted 2006-01-06 04:19 PM


~Love~

Here I lay smiling thinking of my love
It’s been so long since I had this feeling
It’s been a mighty long time since I laid eyes upon you
I’m going to hold you and make you mine
This is a chance I can’t walk away from
Our love for each other is too strong
Yet, we stand here without knowing
We are madly in love with each other
The kind of love where you can’t eat
Can’t sleep can’t breathe
I have to have you for myself
No matter how old or how young we appear
Boy I don’t what to say
When I’m around you I can do wrong
A whisper in time
No matter what race we are
I know we are in love
I’m in love with a man nearly twice my age
And all I want to know
Is are you capable of handling my love
Because it needs care like a plant
Its needs to be feed and cherished
The same way I cherish you
You’re my little Achilles
I’m your Parsees


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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
1 posted 2006-01-07 04:00 AM


The Nazis would frown... hehe.  That rocks!  
God bless...

-GIS

So what if my wings are too scratched, cut, and beat up to fly... I'll walk.

tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
2 posted 2006-01-07 05:35 AM


nicely expressed...well penned.

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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