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Alicat
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since 1999-05-23
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Coastal Texas

0 posted 2006-01-05 02:59 PM


When I see Hell in your eyes
(Do you still miss me?)
did you enjoy my surprize?
(Angel feathers falling.)
You'll see the things that I said
(Tattered skin my embrace.)
were not just dreams in my head.
(Ruptured smile on my face.)

Now as we near the end
begin again as friends;
truths that you spoke to me
caught in complicity.

A rose upon coffin lid
(Is my heart still beating?)
grown from the dreams in my head.
(Is my mind still screaming?)
With one last serpentine kiss
(The drumming of sodden rain.)
I'm dropped into the Abyss.
(Buried alive once again.)

Now as we near the end
begin again as friends;
truths that you spoke to me
caught in complicity.

Alicat
1-3-06

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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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1 posted 2006-01-05 03:48 PM


I do believe that you have found your groove here, bro!




Alicat
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since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094
Coastal Texas
2 posted 2006-01-08 10:01 AM


Hehe...thanky Sis.
Kaos
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since 2001-08-02
Posts 317
between space and time
3 posted 2006-01-18 02:36 PM


this is awesome, i love the way it just grabbed me into the reading and flowed along nicely in my head as i read it

Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free
-i wrote it somewhere in time

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