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green_itchy_stuff
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New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2006-01-03 11:12 PM



I dare say a word
The psycho gone crazy
God just above me
Shred me apart and slam me together

Walking in the desert
The distractions pushed away
Duck behind His power
Let Him guide me
And I remember life
I forgot what it was to live

I still see her face
Hear her voice
God loves me enough to implement the pain
Find souls to join in this
Singing praises that are His
A green leaf of life up from the ash

Condemn another
Shut your mouth!
Find the narrow path
Your eyes loose their stare
Your pupils puke me out
I didn't even see, did your tongue hit the temple floor?

Clearly I see me
Like a wet rock in the mirror
I know what I want
I know whats mine
Something you can't take from me
I know its mine...
And I know its mine...

Errotic death in fall apart
Turn the tune of tales
Spinning wheel, hear the accoustic guitars
Sliced and separated
A soft patch apart
Jesus' residual soul always deep within
Promises guaranteed

So what if my wings are too scratched, cut, and beat up to fly... I'll walk.

© Copyright 2006 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
byski
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since 2006-01-26
Posts 235
Alberta, Canada
1 posted 2006-03-06 09:38 PM


I have to say I like this one the most out of the few I just read. Your messages are thought provoking while you challange your faith, it seems. I like this one because it almost tells a story about the face you see, what is happening after someone is gone. As for the mood and overall quality of your poems they are intreguing and your topics are very relevent to your faith. I'm going to enjoy reading more.
green_itchy_stuff
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New Caney, Tx
2 posted 2006-03-07 08:34 PM


Thank you.

Jesus

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