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tracie66
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0 posted 2006-01-02 12:39 PM



lost my way for awhile
fell into a dark place
a place relentlessly unforgiving
a place filled with loneliness
a loneliness that made me void
void of life, love, emotion
here in body but not in soul
my face in the crowd nullified
my heart loveless
I was lifeless but alive
alive but dead
I was void

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



© Copyright 2006 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2006-01-02 10:24 AM


Tracie~

Knowing the darkness of void
I can testify~
The light shines brightest
on the lighter side

You've come far
from the dim into the light
It brightens my very mood
to see you shine new light~

YOU GO GIRL !!!

Your new photo smiles sooooo beautifully~
Thank you for making the time to come 'home'~

I hope you have some idea of just how happy
it makes me to see you sharing your ink-of-thiink~

Love n' *HUGLETS*
~*Marge*~


~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email -             noles1@totcon.com     

[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (01-03-2006 09:39 AM).]

tracie66
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2 posted 2006-01-03 01:31 AM


happiness shines here today
the light has broken through
pierced my heart and captured my soul
right now I feel
with all my being
I feel alive
I've broken free from the void
that was once my only world
here I am, bright
here shining before you
captured by the essence
of you


Dear Margie girl
you don't know how much happiness it brings me to be back here at passions and to have such loyal friends as you.

Thanks so much for your beautiful and touching reply, it's funny how even the brightest of lights can suddenly be put out, i hope you have come full cirle as I have and never have to return to that dark place.

loving you Margie girl and all that you are..thanks for your friendship.

winged ~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2006-01-03 01:36 PM


Tracie ... it's wonderful to read you again, and so nice to see you here!  

I too have found myself in that same void, and am just coming into the light again. You've captured this feeling well with your words.

It's great to read you! Welcome "home"!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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4 posted 2006-01-03 02:22 PM


Hello lovely....

let me welcome you back to Piptalk..YAY!

So nice to see you here again Tracie.

Welcome back!

Just gotta head for the light...A grat expressive write Dear.

Mxx

how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

tracie66
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5 posted 2006-01-04 05:07 AM


sweet Kit
Thanks so much for reading me your words touched me and brought tears to my eyes. I'm pleased to know that you too have exited the VOID...it's not a place anyone should have to enter and only the brave exit intact sort of
loving your kind words Kit...thanks

~hugs~
Tracie

Darling Maree
Thanks for your support since my return, you remembered me

Thanks for your uplifting comments, I appreciate.

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



EagleOne
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6 posted 2006-01-07 05:43 AM


It is so very good to read you again Tracie. You describe the darkness well. I think it is a place we have all dwelled in from time to time.  I like your signature, I tend to think that love will lead us from darkness. Take care!

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC

tracie66
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7 posted 2006-01-07 06:19 AM


you're so right Eddie, unfortunately too many people enter the dark world of depression and mental illness and while most of us are drawn back to the light, many stay drowning in the deep dark waters for many years, even a lifetime. I was very fortunate to have a great understanding family and wonderful network of friends who kept me afloat and eventually I dragged myself back to shore and into a world I was no longer afraid of.
Thanks my dear for reading me and for your sensitive comments, means alot and as for my signature...I just love it, if you know who's quote it is let me know as I haven't a clue...I only wish I was the author  

~hugs~ floating your way from the mexican  
Tracie


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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