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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2005-12-20 10:09 PM




begging the shower

blood and fear flooding the tiles

hopeless thoughts of clean

©2005 by icebox

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littlewing
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1 posted 2005-12-20 10:57 PM


icey?

you stab the point right through my chest with your words.  And so very few of them.  A gift indeed.


icebox
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in the shadows
2 posted 2005-12-21 09:34 AM


I am beginning to thnk this door should have stayed closed.
Susan Caldwell
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3 posted 2005-12-21 04:00 PM


Read this earlier and it was too much for me to respond just then.



harsh, but true.  

I visualize tiny pieces of who that person would have been washing down the drain.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

littlewing
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4 posted 2005-12-21 07:40 PM


hey . . . we all have bones . . . agreeing with Susan . . . and this is the cleansing . . .

[This message has been edited by littlewing (12-21-2005 09:49 PM).]

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