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Dark Poetry #4

Luna (senryu for Littlewing)

Brian James
Member

since 2005-06-26

Posts 147
Winnipeg

0 posted 2005-12-16 02:35 PM

She tilted her head
Softly on the watery clouds.
I can't imagine.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2005-12-16 07:55 PM

Excellent one!

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2005-12-16 08:08 PM

Brian.....I love how a short verse when done right can make me nod my head or shiver or something that says, well done....like yours is! I hope you will post some more poetry soon!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2005-12-16 11:57 PM

God, this is just beautiful, its so liquid. I LOVE this . . .

Its perfect, Brian . . . thank you

many many smiles . . .

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