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SATURN
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0 posted 2005-12-09 12:35 PM



In the sky we look
We wonder where we belong
We gaze and stare and think
Are we here for a reason
Is this the Universe for us
Are there any other places
Out there for me.

To the stars our eyes do wonder
gazing dizzily out into the Universe
keeping count on every shooting star
we see. The moon hangs in the sky
like a soft flame that never goes out
until morns light.

Into the night we look
we stare past the stars
into the Universe searching
for our special reason for
being in this special Place.

when you find our reason
we wonder are there any more
lurking out there.

My reason was you!
Do you know yours?


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Kaos
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since 2001-08-02
Posts 317
between space and time
1 posted 2006-01-25 02:02 PM


'The moon hangs in the sky
like a soft flame that never goes out
until morns light.'

Awesome! and once again, loved the ending
good write

Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free
-i wrote it somewhere in time

SATURN
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since 2004-05-04
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ok,us
2 posted 2006-01-27 12:11 PM


thanks kaos for your words this helps me greatly.


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