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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 2005-12-03 05:34 AM



I met this woman
Tell me she is one
Branches in the tree
Split bottom top spill

Ceaseless casual a mirror reflects
This is who I really am
Intricate twist and pass
I am the snake with the really sharp teeth...
...and the thin juice to make you be quiet

Fall down here in Mexico
With the fresh fruit and bright leaves
Hard work in poverty
But I don't suffer
And progress is a little slow...
...to the human eye
My skeleton agrees

Then I finally arrive
Here on this mountain
At the top with the ice and wind
I can see so many things, and yet
I'm not teased with jump off

Fire burn in the crazy song
Use your strong right arm and fullfil destiny and truth
Don't settle in the glass cage
I love you, better to remember Jesus loves you

Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit.

© Copyright 2005 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
stevebrklynnyc
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since 2004-01-04
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GA, Camden
1 posted 2005-12-04 07:20 PM


Way cool write, Steve.
green_itchy_stuff
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New Caney, Tx
2 posted 2005-12-05 03:38 PM


Right on.  Thank you.  God bless.

-GIS

Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit.

majnu
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3 posted 2005-12-07 03:42 AM


you kill it with your crass christianity

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

green_itchy_stuff
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Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
4 posted 2005-12-07 05:03 AM


He says to turn the other cheek when someone "slaps" you.  So feel free to go and judge the rest of my work.  I'm sure you'll find more you don't like.  Thank you.  God bless.

-GIS

Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit.

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