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Little Bo Peep
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Little Bo Peep |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Close your eyes now, Leave the world alone, It could be fun. It could be fun. It’s not that pretty I know, But, if it’s all we have, We could hold it close. Close your hands now, Put them in mine. We’ll wish away the scary things, Behind, in front, inside. If we wake up alive, I promise it won’t be hard, even if, I already promised you my time. Close the story now, It’s nearly finished. We want it to be happy, If we happen to end. She won’t sleep, She won’t count sheep. Little Bo Peep, Has lost her mind. Again. Come on God, do I seem bulletproof? |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
effing brilliant piece of beauty. The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return. |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
effing agree this is great..... Annie |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
effing ef. exceeelllent loved this line, so profound We want it to be happy, If we happen to end. can you find me space inside your bleeding heart? |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
excellent write, i rather enjoyed the way you ended it Peace "i said 'How bout a revelution' and he said 'Right' i said oh, you say ah, i say revelution and you say ja,That was the craziest game of poker" |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
great write. nice twist with the sheep and losing and bo peep. you know what i mean miss you already nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Kirst - Hehe, thanks! Annie78 - Thanks for replying, I'm glad you liked it. Lor - You love that line? I love you, ha. Thanks for your comment, as always. Kaos - Thank you,  .Soph - Yeah I know what you mean. I miss you toooooo. (I didn't get to see you lots after Tahiti anyway). *hugs* Come on God, do I seem bulletproof? |
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