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click1
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since 2003-03-25
Posts 152
usa

0 posted 2005-11-30 10:28 PM


Patching the holes,
I never made,
Saying the things,
left unsaid.

Putting to rest the demons,
the fires,
that burned so hot.

Knowing I lived,
giving what I got,
forget what didn't count,
moving on for now.

Letting go,
my pride,
my anger,
my frustration..

Fixing what I can,
I find I'm fine.

Knowing I did,
my very best,
leave history,
to tell the rest.

Life is offering,
something new,
I find it's not,
all about you.

Thanking God,
for all I have,
not regretting,
what I never,
really had.

Love is,
good,
sure,
and never sad.

Cross the water,
turn the page,
thank the gods,
I am saved!

click

"My fears come alive in this place where I once died" -godsmack-


© Copyright 2005 jason - All Rights Reserved
Annie78
Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469
here then there then back here
1 posted 2005-12-01 09:20 PM


couldn't have said it better. i love the way you put this and thank you for making me feel better.
Annie

Kaos
Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317
between space and time
2 posted 2005-12-08 01:36 PM


I like the style and meter you used for this... and, i agree, well spoken. Good write


Peace

"i said 'How bout a revelution' and he said 'Right' i said oh, you say ah, i say revelution and you say ja,That was the craziest game of poker"
OAR

tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
3 posted 2006-01-26 03:15 AM


this is great - very well penned.
~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



kitvb1
Junior Member
since 2006-01-23
Posts 28
Trebgast, Germany
4 posted 2006-01-26 03:24 AM


hmmm, I don't know if I should feel better or worse. ????? but that's just me. A good write, TY.

We've all been there. How we deal with it determines our paths.

kitvb1@hotmail.com

rockbabe
Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 105

5 posted 2006-01-31 05:24 AM


Very nice!!
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