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fractal007
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since 2000-06-01
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0 posted 2005-11-19 12:55 PM


I want to know where it is you say your being came from,
where it is that you are going and how it is you
are going here from there to here to there and thither.
You are lost amid snow and ice covering the frozen
wasteland you created in your wrath and anger trying
to escape them and protect me from something so small.
You decided to run into the crowd to disperse the crowd
to run away from me so you wouldn't have to deal with
the mob or deal with me and so now I've left you alone.
I know exactly where you are and I'm going to watch
and you won't find me, though you look everywhere,
trusting your eyes, your reason, your philosophy.

Run off now, and search, because it's what you do best
this time of year.

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Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
1 posted 2005-11-22 04:43 PM


I really like the feeling that you get from reading this piece. it says alot about someone and your realization of them, the darkness that comes along with it and the shadows.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


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