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ska babe Member
since 2005-11-08
Posts 58nowwhere, IN |
Every night I close my eyes I think of him by my side His eyes are soft, his heart is sweet, and he loves me But as I lie there thinking of him I feel something sharp go through my skin Something cold, something dark, something that I fear at night As I lie here in this pain I think of him and scream his name But as my eyes, open I see his face And wonder why he did this thing His eyes have gone hard, his heart has got sour, and he love me is no longer I lay in my bed as my head starts to go light And I sit there just wondering why Why did he do this, why did he lie, for now it’s my life that’s on the line But as I lie there in my bed my thoughts start to drift, my heart slows down, and my breath starts to shorten And my last words were, Why "I am the one who has to die when it's my time to die, so I'm gonna live life the way I wanna"- Jimi Hendrix |
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Christioned Member
since 2004-01-15
Posts 93Huddling in the dark |
Hey Kid! Welcome. I hope that you enjoy it here and will continue to post. Andi "See my wrists; |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
first of all welcome, secondly I enjoyed your poem very much. It's kind of like my own poem What IS It? in the sense that it continues throughout to ask a question. I hope to see more of your work real soon. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
Awesome first post, i enjoyed it alot. Welcome to PiP! "Do not go gentle into that good night, |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome to Passions! Enjoyed your first post. Please check your email for a speacial greeting! Nightshade - Moderator |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Welcome to pip. Jesus loves you (they don't like me to say that...). You're poem was sad, but I like it because it sounds like something real. It sounds like the other only knows aeros-love. Which means it was never very important in the first place and you haven't lost anything. So be happy about it! -GIS Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
ska babe , why is a good question that you may never know the answer to ... somethings are best when left alone ....when you carry around the past it can weigh you down , look to the future i am sure it will be brighter great poem , keep the pen moving lol ~wolf |
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silverwind Junior Member
since 2005-12-07
Posts 37that place over there |
I enjoyed the read, I'm just glad you're still around to carry on writing. silverwind |
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jinx26 Junior Member
since 2005-12-12
Posts 38Jersey |
Yours is the first I've read. I enjoy it. |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
i know this feeling all too well. glad you are here. Annie there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles |
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ska babe Member
since 2005-11-08
Posts 58nowwhere, IN |
It's always nice to know when you meet another person that feels the same way. "I am the one who has to die when it's my time to die, so I'm gonna live life the way I wanna"- Jimi Hendrix |
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rockbabe Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 105 |
Very nice.....I can feel the emotion. |
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kitvb1 Junior Member
since 2006-01-23
Posts 28Trebgast, Germany |
Passion and power... wonderful kit |
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