it's a long, lonely journey...

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EveGnosis
Member

since 2002-02-21

Posts 300
New York, USA

0 posted 2005-11-02 01:06 AM

from rape to right in,
too real to live
should i lie down or stand up
and walk around again?
my eyes finally wide open up
my eyes finally wide open shut
i finally found the sound
that heals the touch of my tears
smells the taste of all we waste
could feed the others
but we smother each other
with the nectar and pucker the sour
of bittersweet weather
it blows through our trees
swims through our seas
flies through the last gasp we left on this earth

it's a long lonely journey from death to birth

should i die again?
should i die around the pounds
of matter wailing through space?
i know i'll never know until i come face to face
with my own
with my own
with my own cold, dead face
with my own wooden case...

it's a long lonely journey...

of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep.

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

1 posted 2005-11-02 02:24 AM

Oh I hate to think of you, such a butterfly being trapped. It's such a horrible thought. I love the truth and frightenedness (SO not a word) in this poem. Amazing.

Courts.
Hollow.

(PS. I replied to your reply to my poem, lol)

Come on God, do I seem bulletproof?

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2005-11-02 10:00 AM

Eve~

'i finally found the sound
that heals the touch of my tears'

This is as poignant a penning as I'll read this day~

Follow that 'sound' tunnel ... there is a concert of the heart at the end of it~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

gelato
Member

since 2005-10-27

Posts 63
TN,USA

3 posted 2005-11-02 02:37 PM

You write such...bare feeling poems that are intense,very intense. Thank you for writing this.

"Buckle Up! It makes it harder for the aliens to suck you out of your car"

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

4 posted 2005-11-02 11:38 PM

Ten thousand times ten thousand times some more. God Rocks! I like your -----p-o--em-(song)--po-e--m-. Nice.

-GIS

Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit.

shatteredsilver
Member

since 2005-03-31

Posts 63
middle of nowhere

5 posted 2005-11-03 10:27 PM

it's a long lonely journey

eerie and amazing

Sendlhofer
New Member

since 2008-06-14

Posts 1

6 posted 2008-06-14 10:41 PM

Pity you didn't write this, it's lyrics to a Pagoda song featured in gus Van Sant's Last Days movie.

Yes, i regstered just to post this.

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

7 posted 2008-06-21 08:45 AM

Definitely intense, and seriously expressive. It gives this reader a sense of release as I peruse the words. Great poem.

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