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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2005-10-30 04:21 PM






~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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© Copyright 2005 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Beasley
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1 posted 2005-10-30 04:53 PM


Oli chimoli!!!!
Get those grandie girls! Quick!
xoxo
b

Martie
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2 posted 2005-10-30 05:01 PM


Marge/sis...You are always so light and gay...I think you're entitled to one bad day!  
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3 posted 2005-10-30 05:24 PM


This is amazing!  I loved it...very dark...visceral...I truly enjoyed it!

Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine
Still shrouded in blinding Darkness

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4 posted 2005-10-30 05:49 PM


Dear Marge:  This is not the Marge I know and love!!  Wish I had a bucket of sunshine and smiles to send you!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2005-10-30 07:15 PM


I know just how to fix that mood Marge.
Spend an afternoon with the grandie girls carving pumpkins.
That should lighten the mood in a hurry.

But, I have to say, we are all entitled to one of these days once in awhile.

Sending heart hugs your way, Nancy

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me.~

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6 posted 2005-10-30 08:43 PM


I know what you need Marge! Dip into the Hallowe'en chocolate treats!! Works for me.     hugs, Chris
Betty
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7 posted 2005-10-30 10:25 PM


This is so different for you. I like it
Purity
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8 posted 2005-10-30 11:21 PM


As long as that's not an "eternal mark"...
Sorry, that is a very bad inside pun to what was a very well written piece of literary art.

I loved it.

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

EveGnosis
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9 posted 2005-11-02 12:37 PM


now i understand how someone can get 35,980 posts... because poems like this are a testimony to talent.

you rock, marge!!

of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep.

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10 posted 2005-11-02 05:58 AM


Stars Here are some stars to start shifting your brood mood! ~ which, btw, you expressed very well!

Love & Star Light,
EO

dgvarner
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11 posted 2005-12-21 01:47 AM


Miss Margie...I never thought I'd find your name in here...

Hope the mood didn't last too long!

hugs, g

"A tiger who does not prowl becomes a rug..."  ;)

Annie78
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12 posted 2005-12-21 09:50 AM


so unlike you, but know that the mood has lifted. well done and every one is entitled to a brood mood occassionally. but please sweet marge i have enough for both of us okay. get them grandie girls and play with them for me okay.
Annie

there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles

Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2005-12-22 02:48 PM


FriendsAll~

Sometimes it just does us good to write 'outside the box' of our poetic familiarity ... I do ... and sometimes the poem just might REALLY be ME~

Thank you ALL for the replies~

I may find some dark ink again in the future to share with you all~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email -         noles1@totcon.com       

tracie66
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14 posted 2006-01-02 12:15 PM


As the stars
start to shift
Make Margie's mood bright
Let her heart shine
with guideing light
Shift her mood
from black as night
Give her the brightness
of the sunlight



~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Marge Tindal
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15 posted 2006-01-02 10:20 AM



SweetTracieGirl~

It lifts my heart
just seeing you here
How very wonderful
the start of this New Year !!

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email -           noles1@totcon.com     

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