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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 2005-10-28 03:44 AM



Take a sip, try it
Early morning smooth
Burn around your lip
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Open up the day
Something new and fresh
Droplets on the floor,
Just a little mess
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Warm smooth wake up
With coffee on my lip
It started with a sip

Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit.

© Copyright 2005 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-10-28 08:11 PM


I put just enough creamer in so I won't get burned.... but it never fails to spill just a bit going up the stairs...LOL I clean them often... enjoyed this
green_itchy_stuff
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2 posted 2005-10-29 02:10 AM


Yeah, those little bits of mess.  lol.  Actually I was filling out an application for a coffee shop and they said to be creative, so somewhat of a smartaleck poem was born.  

-GIS

Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit.

Purity
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3 posted 2005-10-30 11:19 PM


Java the what?? LOL.
This is definitely a trek down a different trodden path for you, there Greeny...LOL

But, since my doctor has OK'd it, I'm back to drinking a few cups of the bean juice each morn...

Hey, did you know that God Loves you?

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

green_itchy_stuff
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4 posted 2005-11-01 03:02 AM


How could I forget God's love?  

That's a funny way of describing it... bean juice... lol.

God bless
-GIS

Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit.

EveGnosis
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5 posted 2005-11-02 12:31 PM


"for trying to deprive him of the juice!!!!!"

oh wow. i should really shoot myself for the leo quote there. ouch.

kewl poem, greeny, and i take total credit for that designation, thank you purity!

did you see last days yet? there's a video there just for you...

love ya,

mike

of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep.

green_itchy_stuff
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6 posted 2005-11-02 11:42 PM


Ahhh!!! Crap!  You are my friend, love, phase, dazed, insane, watch the crow puke and grow longer toenails!  Yeah, Thats one of those things you say and then later say something like "Wow, what in the world did I say that for?"

-GIS

Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit.

Kaos
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7 posted 2005-11-11 02:47 PM


I enjoyed this piece... and the comments equally as much lol

"Do not go gentle into that good night,
Old age should burn and rave at close of day;
Rage, rage against the dying of the light"
-Dylan Thomas

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