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See the Light... |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
In here somewhere... The Devil's background Somewhat hidden And out of sight Wanna see the tip of my nose Follow yourself Scatter ground and air assault Screaming troops "MOVE! MOVE! MOVE! By all means... move Oregon wetlands wet from rain The clouds and shadows that tickle my brain Tickled, laughing, intense inner screaming La, la, la, LLLUUUUUUVVV My head on the ground The four mile long needle balanced between my eyes Just standing there in perfect balance Slips downward about three inches and stops The darkness around seems corrosive Bed sheets, dark-green, midnight... The laser light isn't a beam It lifted the dark And I can see, plenty, in the rain... Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit. |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
The meaning of this poem elludes me, but I like it alot. It's got some very neat and creative imagery. What is it about to you? |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
interesting write thanks for sharing  |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
interesting write thanks for sharing -may the force be with you in poetry |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
To me its about seeing the light of faith, truth, and hope. Then letting it take you along instead of forcing it. -GIS Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit. |
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